Hello all,
Just a quick update.
1) - well done on completing the first Controlled Assessment so well.
2) Your next one is to complete a piece of descriptive writing, as if you were a character in a scene from a film. This will take place in your double lesson on WEDS. However - there may be a problem with the school being shut for strike action - this hasn't been decided yet - if the school is shut, we'lkl just have to do it in the next lesson.
So - you need to prepare for this task and be ready by Wednesday. You need to:
- decide on the scene you want to use and watch it a few times
- decide which character you want to be
- create which tells you what you will write about and in what order
- Read the model answer carefully (provided in class) and annotate it for strengths and weaknesses
- Use the videos in the English section of www.youtube.com/cherwellonline to learn and improve your performance on the target areas from your first piece of writing.
Any problems, come and see me or ping me an email.
Have a great weekend,
Mr Boulter
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